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KadberryFrooglemuffin

PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:08 pm


Shakuni felt bad for Adelaide. The girl fluctuated between confident and distressed quicker than the priestess would have liked. Unfortunately, she had to do what she had to do, and that meant she had to lead Adelaide into this whether the poor girl was confident about herself or not.

The priestess was retaining her normal voice for longer than usual for reasons not even Shakuni quite understood. "Step up to the fountain and reach out for the color that calls to you. Whether it be pink, white, blue, black, or any of the colors, reach out and try to touch it. Then, I suppose what will occur afterwards will vary."

Admittedly, Shakuni was often foggy on many of the events that transpired afterwards. It was only by piecing together the information that Shakuni had much of any idea what happened. "Make your choice, Adelaide."

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:09 pm


I like that first like in the Preface. Seems like it's foreshadowing something important (or alluding to, since the speaker is looking back in time). Like there will be indirect references to that section of characterization scarrered in all of the books.

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Pensakura

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:33 pm


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I like that first like in the Preface. Seems like it's foreshadowing something important (or alluding to, since the speaker is looking back in time). Like there will be indirect references to that section of characterization scarrered in all of the books.

I agree about the preface. The only thing I disliked was the names, they were hard to pronounce and they made it sound like you were really trying hard to come up with something cool sounding. Also, indentions would have made it a bit easier to read. But otherwise it was really good.
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